Friday, May 15, 2009

sky before...
















what happened to the sky..?
there was something i could see on the sky before..
but now..
what bring all these changes..?
above the greenish land..
night shall fall upon the star..?
truth behind the fake..?
fake behind the truth..?
what make thing changes..?
i wonder...
what am i writing..?

8 comments:

jfook said...

This is the post with LEAST grammatical mistakes.
Except "what HAS happened to the sky" and "...I could see IN the sky..."
However, when the no-mistakes-sentences are combined together, I still didn't get the meaning. Is that you are too poetic or....

cyws said...

ooo..least mistake..?i see.. haha..dun understand.?maybe my language got problem..haha..

jfook said...

least is the superlative of little.
little->less->least

SuFang said...

Time changes one's heart and the world looked from the eyes is no longer the same.. and the value of things also different when we look and know more about reality. Perhaps?

Nana Lana said...

ahaksss...

d meaning is embedded in ur heart~

=P

minorsmajor said...

Hmmm since everyone is being so poetic and corrective...

Refined :P

What has happened to the sky?
Once there but now unseen?
The reason for this evades me
As how the sky is blue and the grass is green.
Twilight falls, the heaven glitters
Light in darkness?
Or darkness prevailing?
As I seek the answers
I ponder even more
What this poem really means...

jfook said...

OMG, what if Wee Seng sends a copy of his blog to you and you help him to rephrase before he posts it up???? LOL. You have changed the whole thing..WTF LOL

cyws said...

sufang, value might change upon truth..true..true../nainai, trying to play with psyco meh..?wat embedded in heart la..haha../minors major can come out with such nice poem..amazing../jfook u hits the highest frequency of comment for tis blog of mine..haha..thnks alot..